Long Copy Secrets

Master copywriter Robert Collier often used a technique to get people to read more of his sales letters. You can use this same technique right now to increase the readership of your web pages and emails.

I'll get to it in a moment. For now, let me tell you a couple of things about readership in general, and the importance of using long versus short copy, in most cases.

If you're one of those marketers that rebel against the idea of long copy, and insist that people don't read it, listen up. If you're copy is boring, or unsubstantiated, or fails to promise the delivery of an expected benefit, then you are absolutely right.

But if you promise the expected benefit, and use engaging copy that's firing on all cylinders, effectively attracting attention, building interest, desire, and action, have no fear.

Your prospects will read as many words as necessary to convince themselves to become buyers. That could mean thousands of words, depending what you are asking them to do.

If the price is significant, or the thing you are selling demands a significant change of behavior, or even if you are operating in a very mature, hotly competitive commodity market, you just cannot expect people to decide favorably with minimal information.

They need enough sound reasons to buy, and they need those reasons appropriately substantiated. Too many marketers paint pretty pictures, but fall down when it comes to demonstrating proof.

Anyway, getting back to that little technique that Robert Collier used that I was telling you about.

Collier observed that human beings possess a couple of inborn traits that he used to get them to read his letters. I'm assuming you're one, so I'm going to include you in this ;=)

A) We're naturally curious. We have an inborn "desire to know" hard wired into our brains. It's instinctive, part of our survival program.

B) We just can't stand having a half baked thought or idea, hanging around waiting to be finished. If there's an open loop, we want it shut.

So how did the legendary Collier use these to his money making advantage?

He would set up a story, and build up a primary point, and then before taking that primary point to it's logical conclusion, head off in a secondary direction, while promising to return to the first one momentarily.

His readers hung on his every word, because they were curious about how the story would end, and they could'nt stand to leave the first thought unfinished.

You can use this same technique to great effect online. Or you can turn it upside down like this in an autoresponder series.

Instead of introducing the secondary point toward the beginning of the copy, you introduce it toward the end, leave the thought unfinished, and promise to close the loop in the next installment. Collier did this constantly to create a sense of anticipation in the minds of his periodical subscribers, and you can see the same technique used frequently in the theatre and in soap operas.

To give you an idea of how powerful this idea is, get this...

Psychologists took to studying the behavior of wait staff in Restaurants. At regular intervals they would question the waiters and waitresses about the orders they had taken.

Almost without fail, the waiters and waitresses could remember what the people who were still in the Restaurant had ordered, with a high degree of accuracy. But almost always, they totally forgot what the people who had already paid their bill had ordered, even though those patrons had left the Restaurant only minutes before.

Because the mind hates unfinished business, it remains engaged until the event or subject of attention unfolds and resolves itself in a logical conclusion. In this case, the payment of the check.

And in the case of your sales letter or email sequence, the close. That's a big deal, because that's where you ask for the money, right?

Copyright 2005 Daniel Levis

Daniel Levis is a top marketing consultant & direct response copywriter based in Toronto Canada. Recently, Daniel & world-renowned publicist & copywriter Joe Vitale teamed up to co author "Million Dollar Online Advertising Strategies - From The Greatest Letter Writer Of The 20th Century!", a tribute to the late, great Robert Collier.

Let the legendary Robert Collier show you how to write words that sell...Visit the below site & get 3 FREE Chapters! http://www.Advertising-Online-Strategies.com/ad-strategies.html

Latest News


Nationwide Credit Card Processing Provider, BankCard USA, Engages ...
MarketWatch - 6 hours ago
"Internet marketing is a large source of revenue for many businesses today," notes Alan Griefer, President of BankCard USA. "Click-fraud is more prevalent ...

Reply.com Launches World's First Marketplace for Enhanced Clicks(TM)
MarketWatch - 1 hour ago
"We are on a mission to make Internet marketing available to businesses of any size by making it easy and profitable to generated locally-targeted and ...

Tripology Appoints Internet Marketing and Lead Gen Expert to Board ...
PR Web (press release), WA - 5 hours ago
"His success as an entrepreneur and innovator in the field of online lead generation and internet marketing means he's done this before. ...

Extra Cash for the Holidays or Anytime With the Launch of Diamonds ...
MarketWatch - Dec 2, 2008
Bayshore Solutions integrates technology and Internet marketing services to ensure measurable results for clients. For more information about Web site ...
Extra Cash for the Holidays or Anytime With the Launch of Diamonds ... International Business Times
Businesses Thrive Amidst a Recession Thanks to Live Help TMCnet
all 11 news articles

Marketing Pilgrim

Search Engine Optimization Company Submit Express Hires New Vice ...
MarketWatch - 21 hours ago
Submit Express provides search engine optimization and Internet marketing services. It has been featured on both the 2007 and 2008 Inc. 5000 lists as one of ...
Increase Visibility Achieves #2 Ranking in PromotionWorld's Top ... PR Web (press release)
InsWeb Partners with ClearGauge to Improve Accessibility to ... PR Web (press release)
all 16 news articles

Business road warrior opts for Internet marketing to keep family first
DeSoto Appeal, TN - 13 hours ago
Around late April, Stephenson launched an Internet marketing company. Memphis Sudden Values could be coming to an inbox near you. "What I do is help local, ...

Pontiflex Launches ROI Calculator, Enables Marketers to Easily ...
MarketWatch - 2 hours ago
The calculator empowers online marketers and advertising agencies to proactively assess returns on their marketing dollars. This is useful especially in a ...

Internet Marketing News

Is the internet marketing future mobile?
Business Feet, UK - 1 hour ago
Internet marketing gurus may have to learn how to make their adverts miniature in future, if the latest trends are anything to go by. ...
'Now is the time to address mobile online marketing' Internet Marketing News
all 3 news articles

HispanicBusiness.com

Consumers Benefit from a Frenzy of Around-the-Clock Online Shopping
MarketWatch - Dec 1, 2008
Additionally, Bath and Body Works added social networking to their marketing efforts by offering their first online friends and family promotion. ...
Video: Online Retailers See Monday As Black Friday AssociatedPress
Online Retailers Dangle Free Shipping, Discounts Wall Street Journal
Local businesses attempt to participate in Cyber Monday sales rush Beaufort Gazette
Atlanta Journal Constitution - BizReport (press release)
all 1,470 news articles

Zeer Announces Formation of Advisory Board
MarketWatch - 3 hours ago
He has spent the bulk of his career in strategic marketing and consulting roles, and has been involved in Internet strategy since the early 1990s. ...

Resources